1、长短句交叉;

2、使用插入语;

3、用词是否多样、准确、形象尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;

4、关键词是否换用切勿老用重复词;

5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项

1.适当用被动替换积极这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (例如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )

举个经典结尾的例子It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing soits competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2.善于使用插入语例如说把副词、连接词等作为插入语放在中间一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间一般放在动词、助动词后两边分别加上逗号。举比如下 Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要学会换词换形象具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people,

opinion 等等)例如第一条的例子中applicable替换proper; approaches替换ways;implement替换carry out;

sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。

下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子看看他是怎样运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法精彩替换和句型都用上了作文有了很大的提高。I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)

thrilling 替换 exciting;

sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth;

google 替换 search;

an army of 替换 a lot of。

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growindowsg individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型用来描述在某个时期发生了啥事情;

Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular;

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型表达“与?一致”的意思替换 With ?;

Advancement 替换 development;

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into;

Current ( currently )替换 now;

Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.;

Growindowsg individuals 替换 more and more people;

It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型 说某事是毫不夸张的。(it goes wthout exaggeration that更好)For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 替换 To begin with;

We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法;

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动;

Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides;

Deliver 替换 send。

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way,especially the growindowsg violence ,porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,

这个句子有三个精彩之处

首先There is no denying that这个句型;

其次however作为插入语;

再次function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to。

Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing );

Net citizen 网民属于精彩用词。(直接用 netizen更好)

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides;

Computers do play 使用do 表示强调;

Positive 替换 important / good 等;

A slice of 替换 a part of;

Unfavorable 替换 bad;

Impacts 替换 effects / influences;

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入语;

Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象

merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) ;

Facet 替换 aspect。

以下是45个最经典的替换词各位同学可以参考一下:

31. next to / virtually impossible替换nearly / almost impossible.

32.regarding/concerning 替换about.

33.crucial/paramount 替换important.

35. assiduous替换hard-working

36. arduous替换difficult

37.underdeveloped/financially-challenged 替换poor(因为poor通常含有贬义)

38. demonstrate /manifest 替换show

39. invariably 替换always

40. perilous/hazardous替换dangerous(写社会类作文时常用说啥社会现象是不好的有害的)

41. formidable 替换difficult

42. quintessential 替换typical(举例时常用比如a quintessential example should be cited that=for example; for instance)

43. distinguished 替换famous

44. feasible替换possible

45. consequently, accordingly替换so

作文同义替换词以及最新的2013年考研信息希望对各位考生有所帮助。

动词(词组)1. absorb->assimilate 吸收

agree partly->agree with reserve 有保留地赞同

arouse->ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate 引起;鼓励

devote to->dedicate to 把??奉献于;专注于

emphasize->accentuate 强调

expect->anticipate 期望;预期

get into chaos->with chaos ensuing 陷入混乱

hand in->render 提出

limit->stress/hinder/hamper 限制;阻止;阻碍

operate->manipulate 操作;操纵

publicize->propagandize 宣传公布繁荣(的)(词性不同注意使用正确形式)

sway->vacillate 影响;摇摆使摇摆

think->contemplate/muse/meditate/retrospect 思考考虑

thrive->palmy(a.)/flourishing(v./a.)/prosperity(n.)

undermine->sap/enervate/debilitate 破坏;使衰弱衰竭

use->utilize 使用;利用

2. 形容词/副词

hurt->vulnerable 受伤的;易受攻击的

inevitable-indispensable 必然的;不可缺少的

in fact->actually/virtually 事实上;实际上(ad.)

key->crucial/vital/consequential 关键的;重要的

large->miraculous/marvelous 大的;不可思议的(表程度)

obvious->conspicuous 明显的;显著的

proper->apposite 适当的;合适的

persuasive->thorough/sound/specific/convincing 有说服力的

true->accurate 正确的;准确的

vague->gratuitous/unwarranted/oversimplified 模糊的

3. 名词(词组)

bias->prejudice/discriminate 偏见;歧视

character->trait/individuality/idiosyncrasy/personality 品质;特性;个性child->juvenile 小孩;青少年

clash->conflict/collision/rencounter 冲突

custom->convention/tradition 传统;习俗

delegate->representative 代表

detail->specific 细节

lawmaking->legislation 立法

offspring->descendant 后代;子孙

value->merit 价值4. 其他

although->albeit/notwithstanding 尽管(conj.)

but->nonetheless/nevertheless 然而;但是呢(conj.)

through->in term of/via 通过(prep.)

physical health 生理健康

mental fitness 心理健康

keep optimistic保持乐观

pessimistic 悲观的

commit suicide 自杀

do physical exercises 进行体育锻炼

junk food 垃圾食品

well-balanced diet 均衡饮食

infectious diseases 传染病

despise 轻视，鄙视

anxiety 焦虑；渴望；挂念

disturbed 扰乱的

envious 嫉妒

admire 钦佩

esteem 尊重

grieved 伤心的

impatient 没有耐心的

courteous 礼貌

diligent 勤奋

generation gap 代沟

the old/aged/elders/elderly, senior citizens 老年人

independence 独立

doting care 溺 爱

spoil 溺 爱

persistence 坚 持

success 成 功

Achievement 成就 成功

conquer 征服

surmount 克服，越过；战胜

triumph 胜利

acquire 获得

attainment 成就

innovation 创新

striving spirit 奋斗精神

spirit 拼搏精神

striving spirit 奋斗精神

spirit 拼搏精神

determined

outlook of life 人生观

difficulty 困难

challenge挑战

confidence 信心

crisis 危机

employment 就业

cooper ation/teamwork 合作

team spirit 团队精神

pursue 追求

satisfy 满足

thirsty for 渴望

yearn for 渴望

bravery勇气

indulge 放任，纵容

inspire 鼓舞

stimulate 激励

tolerate 容忍

contaminate 污染

environmental protection 环境保护

keep ecological balance 保持生态平衡

sustainable development strategy 可持续发展战略 save the energy 节约能源（节能）

reduce the emission of greenhouse gases 减少温室气体排放（减排） greenhouse effect 温室效应

clean renewable energy 清洁可再生能源

low carbon economy 低碳经济

disaster 灾难

catastrophe 灾难

deforestation 滥 砍 滥 伐

desertification 沙 漠 化

water and soil erosion 水土流失

sandstorm 沙 尘 暴

snowstorm 雪 灾

typhoon 台 风

flood 洪 水

earthquake 地震

责任：duty/responsibility

shoulder/assume/undertake责任感

sense of responsibility义务与责任

逃避：avoid/shun/shirk

奉献：devote/devotion/dedicate/dedication

职业道德：professional ethics

欺诈行为：dishonest behaviors

伪劣产品：fake commodities

虐待：abuse

错误 mistreat, maltreat, ill-treat(ment)

赡养：do good to, care, look after, take care of, financially support

转趋势：reverse the trend

cultural exchange 文化交流

cultural integration/blending 文化融合

multi-culture, mosaic culture, pluralistic culture 多元文化

preserve and cherish 保存珍惜

absorb its essence 取 其 精 华

Cross-cultural 跨 文 化 的

cultural differences 文化差异

diversity 多样性

tradition 传统

treasure 财富

civilization 文明

mainstream 主流

diploma 学历 学位证书

去其糟粕：resist its dark side

偶像崇拜：idol worship

学术抄袭：academic plagiarism

上网成瘾：web addiction

电子产品：digital products 数码游戏：electronic games

手机入网：mobile-phone subscription 手机短信：text message

数码媒体: electronic media

大 众 媒 体 : mass media

流 行 文 化 ： popular culture 反智主义: anti-英特尔lectualism

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